100 Word Challenge #22

This week’s story is based on this image:

« That picture was taken in the summer of ’69. » I had told her from across the room as she fixated her gaze on the one man in the middle of that picture, somewhat puzzled. « His name is Jay Gatsby » I explained. « People always told stories about how he chose to live his life, no-one really knows anything « real » about him though. Some say he was a conman, others a hero. There’s a fine line between love and hate, but he could make you feel both of ’em at once, in the most intense way imaginable. » « Ugh, what baloney » she replied. »

A big thank you to Valeska from 3A for doing this during the holidays – that’s motivation for you 🙂




3 réflexions sur “100 Word Challenge #22

  1. Mr Kilcoyne (Team 100WC)

    Hi Valeska,
    Well done on your entry into this week’s 100 Word Challenge.
    I really liked the way that you have started your story. It’s always interesting to start a story with some dialogue.
    I also loved your choices of verbs, especially « fixated ». It’s a great word to choose.
    When using speech, sometimes it’s a good habit to start a new line when someone new speaks, so that it helps the reader.
    Keep up the excellent work.
    Mr Kilcoyne
    Team 100WC

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